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PostSubject: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:11 am

hello there!
Ive finally finished the first page of my manga! and i have decided to share it with you!
i'll be making the next page soon! and also can someone give me some tips or programs that will make it better,
ill be geting a tablet soon for christmas so it will make the drawings better!


here is the site

http://crossmyheart.smackjeeves.com/

ill also love to see fan art....once i get further into the story

BTW! i forgot to mention that you read this like a traditional manga, so insted of left to right it is right to left Very Happy
also the 1st pannle is ment to say museum......but i forgot to write it....lol
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:54 am

Its good Erin Smile
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:02 am

HOLY CRAP!!! you hand drew all of those?!!? that's good. Real good. lol
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:56 am

yeah, but i also edited it on my computer
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:36 am

ooh nice erin really professional looking...lol i can understand traditional fine, but right to left?...please tell me you're doing an english layout next? it hurts my head......
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Tue Dec 09, 2008 9:14 pm

I draw with my right hand, but i can draw with my left, but it isnt that detailed and messy Very Happy
and no sorry im not changing it....maybe of you flip it around it will make it eaiser Very Happy
lol by my opinion the first page sucks Very Happy
Page 2 added. it will show up soon Razz

RARW!!! thats it my manga sucks...Im going to find a better way to make it.....

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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Wed Dec 10, 2008 12:09 am

I think it's good! I suggest you first write out a plot and then turn it into the comic.
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PostSubject: hey   Wed Dec 10, 2008 12:12 am

its a good manga i like it i think its funny this is boring click woo lol
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:01 am

i have wrote out the story Very Happy it has a long intro though...

Ok page 3 is finished and it is much better than the first two, it looks like what i wanted. it will show up soon

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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Wed Dec 10, 2008 9:20 pm

...This Manga Belongs to erin please don't steal it...?...i wasn't even thinking of stealing iuntil i saw that...lol but now i will post them here!...that way i don't have to see the word smackjeeves...my bro asked me if you were drawing dirty pictures because the site is called smackjeeves.


#1

#2

#3

#4

/\there is something wierd about this one...i don't like it.....


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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Thu Dec 11, 2008 6:01 am

lol thanks Dingen...sorry about that Very Happy


And
lol yes I put those on it haha, just so no one will steal it, lolI think the 3rd one says
"please dont steal OR YOU DIE"....or something Very Happy
and no there are no dirty pictures..........lol
BAH! I CANT STAND TO SEE THE FIRST TWO comics!!!
i hate them so much, but now i have learnt how to make it better Razz
the story is going to get interesting soon dont worrie people!


EDIT! yeah actually it says "please dont steal OR ILL EAT YOU!" lol


EDIT(agian): i have finished drawing the 4th page and i will add effects when i finish drawing the 5th one, i really like the 5th one, i think its a funny scene Very Happy
oh and the 3rd page is up on the site, and WOW i need to make a banner for this manga...
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Thu Dec 11, 2008 8:40 am

...i know yo don't like the first two...but i can see no difference.....

http://crossmyheart.smackjeeves.com/




...when you click it takes you to the manga!...i made it in three seconds....lol
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Thu Dec 11, 2008 9:01 pm

wow coolies! Very Happy
i will use that for now but im going to photoshop colour a picture i have drawn Very Happy
you can make that into a banner if you want,

and maybe I only notice the diffrence because i draw it....lol

i have finished drawing 7 pages, now i need to ink them and then put effects.
its gonna get fun ~ lol

here is a story summery for now

It is about a girl named Kagura, she is sent out of her village to find the stone of hearts because it was stolen from the village many many years ago, and kaguras magic is the strongest in the village so she must find it before its power controls the weak hearted, but she dosent know that shakaru, a boy mixed with a dragon has stolen the stone and broke it into shards so that he could sell them, so he sold them to people around the world!.

two years later kagura walks around in the streets of nervana thinking about how she will find the stone, and then she runs into keir, a boy who looks just like shakaru but with a diffrent personality and hair colour, so keir and kagura work together to find the stone shards. but kagura soon finds out that keir is also shakaru! because its his split personality!!
I wonder what will happen! read and find out!!
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Thu Dec 11, 2008 9:56 pm

wow you are really good
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Thu Dec 11, 2008 10:51 pm

thanks! Very Happy

here is the chapter art




Page 4 is complete!!
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Wed Dec 17, 2008 2:36 am

UPDATE(sorry 4 double posting....agian....yeah, i need more people to post lol)

I have added the new pages
6 and 7 have been added

and now im using ink like traditional manga artists Razz

enjoy

so far i have 670 page views and 4 faves.....lol
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:06 am

...your sad...you need more posts.....


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/\there is something wierd about this one...i don't like it.....
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:43 am

lol i like the last two Very Happy
they are cool! i used traditional ink on them but mostly on the 7th one Razz
i just remembered that i drew a milk container in the background of the guard Razz also in his mouth it says
"CRAP" lol
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PostSubject: Re: DTGs manga comic, Cross My Heart   Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:10 pm

Erin your COmic is very good
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